writing goal

mud fight

My chosen moment in time is: mud fight
See	Hear	Feel/ Touch	Smell	Taste
slimy mud crunchy moose ✓ mud flying everywhere✓	whistling wind chopping wind✓	shivering ✓	the smell of rotorua ✓	sweety air✓
A simile or metaphor I will use:the mud squishes between my toes like chocolate moose.		Sequence - make notes about the order you will write about your moment in time.
		First:
		Then:
		Finally:
My opening sentence:as i walk to get to the mudfight i start to smell ✓

As we walk to get to the mudfight  i start to smell a slimy mushy smale what a all fill  smale .ok where here the teachers say and then they start to say we can play in it . All of the kids run and say fight we can see mud flying everywhere .after the teacher say its time to go back to camp we all walked back to camp uncomfortable .It felt like slimy moose and smells like rotorua. the chopping wind is making me shiver.  Aswell as the sweety air brushing past me .mud